The Hunt
Patient, in the browning grass,
all is still, time made of glass.
My prey remains as still as i,
but a movement in the earth i spy.
Time shatters, the world narrows
to a half blurred circle going past like an arrow,
eight legs beat a tattoo on the ground,
all the watchers they scatter as they feel the sound.
Low to the the ground, i skid through the dust,
pounding legs threaten to break the earths crust.
wind through the grass blades, fly through the flowers,
the seconds are rubber, they stretch out to hours.
A wolf in the gravel, i race and i run,
my quarry is tiring, my chase almost done,
then finally i catch him, my vision stops spinning,
I'm through with today's "population thinning".
I remain the assassin of this waving green ocean,
my name is spider, natural selection in motion.
hmmm it's an interesting premise, and I like the first stanza especially, but it's a little clunky I find...and confusing as to what's going on.
ReplyDeleteListening to super rhythmic African chants really gave this reading experience something extra. :)
ReplyDeleteI love poems where the writer takes the ordinary and often overlooked and spins it (no pun intended) into something else.
The rhyme scheme was very strong - more so near the end again - and the last stanza was profound.
The imagery is great.It's an attribute to the author.
ReplyDeleteThank you