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Monday, March 15, 2010

Ghazal time!

Today we are going to do some form poetry, specifically a type of poem that comes from what was, at the time, called Persia.
This form of poetry is called a ghazal, (pronounced "guzzle"), and consists of many rhyming couplets, not obviously connected.
Of course they are connected, otherwise we would have what we in the trade like to call "complete and total screwed-up nonsense", but they are connected much less blatantly than tradition english stanza poetry.

Anyways, history lesson aside, here goes.

Home away from home


People in cardboard box towns,
Buried in cardboard caskets in the ground,

People collapsed and folded into briefcases
in their own hands on escalators forever going down

White line code written on bathroom stall walls
Spelling out trash can fires dusted in brown

Rusted tin soldiers wearing moth-eaten coats
and hobo glove crowns

Empty three-piece-suits doing
only what the television tells them is allowed

Assembly-line rebels
marching in time with the crowd

Deaf homeless with canes
hearing voices through the ground

Flight plan laid world
turning backwards around

3 comments:

  1. Hmmm nice!
    I like what you did with the rhyme scheme, it's unusual for ghazals as far as I understand them. But it really helps to tie it together.
    My favourite is the couplet about briefcases...it really struck home.

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  2. I confess total ignorance about ghazals - except what Thomas taught me in 'Waiting for Columbus'. And now you.
    The rhyme scheme is lovely, though it is much stronger near the end then at the beginning.
    "Empty three-piece-suits" really struck a chord for me - the message was clear.

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